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Proud. Read Between The Linesby =geneca1

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If you take the time to read between the lines of every mean thing you've ever heard in your life, deep down, they're encouraging you to be proud of your deformaties. Be proud of whatever faults make you, You.... It's as simple as that

(A future one coming soon with all GOOD things about people)

EDIT: A few new words were added in this update, the repeating problem is solved.

Critique by ~Inneryeti Nov 15, 2012, 12:35:43 PM

Bold design with a great message. This is a point that although talked about a lot recently is far too important to not address. I like the font choice in the piece. It fit's well with the rest of your theme. The color coded message in the text is a clever touch as well.
I only see two thing that detract. If you are going to use colloquial spellings(Krippled) you should do it consistently. Having only one tends to make it look like a mistake, where if you had several it would appear more deliberate. Secondly I think that the overall piece would be stronger and have a more finished look if the first letter of the words on the left side had not been clipped.
Overall good work. Keep spreading the word. It's the only way we can change those things we need to. I believe that choosing topics that are important to us as individuals lends strength to our pieces and this is really no exception.

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*anonymousfemalebrony Nov 20, 2012 Student General Artist

I hate to be that girl, but "crippled" is spelt wrong. But hey, I think it looks better with a K c;

=geneca1 Nov 20, 2012 Student Artist

Oh dear...

*anonymousfemalebrony Nov 19, 2012 Student General Artist

This ultimately made my day.

=geneca1 Nov 19, 2012 Student Artist

I'm so happy it did

~Inneryeti Nov 15, 2012 Student Photographer

Keep it up.

=geneca1 Nov 15, 2012 Student Artist

I will

=GazTV-inc Nov 15, 2012

Very interesting how you made that, reminds me of my one...
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You pit a lot of thought into the choice of words.
I was more going for the "Detention lines written on the chalk board at school" for repetition. and I noticed there was a hidden message which I decided to highligt in red. It was unintentional.

=geneca1 Nov 15, 2012 Student Artist

Hm, didn't even know that one existed. My hidden message was intentional

=GazTV-inc Nov 15, 2012

Yeah, I can tell cos you must have picked the words and decided upon the order to spell out your message.
My Underdogs secret message is old, and I thought it was clever, but t didn't speak to everyone.
This has the potential to help a lot of teens through those tough years, "be proud, there's only one you!" messages, I think you're gonna help a lot more people than I can.

=geneca1 Nov 15, 2012 Student Artist

I hope enough people see these

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